Score: 4

"Exactly what it is..."

submission: R.A.I.L

date: August 28, 2009

It really is, "Nothing Too New or Interesting".
The game is extremely repetitive and 20 seconds into the game I was bored out of my mind.
Even if an excess of enemies pile onto the screen, it's not very challenging.
Lack of music doesn't exactly help it out either.
Reading your Author Comment, I see that this is your first flash in a very long time, and apparently you've made a lot of progress since then.
Keep working on your scripting and you'll have something that you won't have to worry about in being blammed.
It's not bad enough to be blammed though.

Final Count:
2/5 - 4/10

-Kelster Lynn

Score: 3

"...WHAT?"

submission: cry hinata

date: February 10, 2009

This flash was terrible.
The only thing that moved were the mouths and even those were done terribly.
They weren't even synced up!
Now, I know that syncing up the mouths to the words is a pain in the ass, but you could have at least made an effort!
I don't agree with RESPRiT about the whole preloader thing and even if I didn't like the music that wouldn't matter that much if you showed me how well you could make me want to keep listening to it. (But you failed in that regard also.)
BUT, for you to reply with something as half-assed as implying that you're better than him by making more flashes than him is a bunch of crap.
I've always said that the better animator/programmer is the one with the least number of flashes. And do you know why? It's because, THAT MEANS THAT THEY PUT FORTH A LOT OF TIME AND EFFORT.
Just so you know, I don't hate Hinata, or NaruHina.

Good Points:
Seeing that small Hinata chibi in the middle was a breath of fresh air from all the BOXES.
Deidara in the background. (At first I wasn't sure what he was doing, then after 50 Hinata boxes I realized that he was playing the piano.)

Due to Deidara, and the chibi's (and my overall support of NaruHina) I give this a 3.

Get better at animating.

1/5
3/10

-KelsterLynn

(I'll be watching your progress.)

Score: 10

"Woah Shit! Is this Alenald?"

submission: NARUTO: The Musical

date: January 27, 2009

Alenald? Holy Crap! Never knew that you had a Newgrounds!

My Review:
Heh, still funny no matter how many times I see it.
I absolutely love the way that you animate!
Everything is very smooth and crisp.
Nothing laggy or blocky at all.

I can't really say much, because there's nothing to say except that it's AWESOME.

Animation 5/5
Sound 5/5
Scene Transition 5/5
Humor 5/5
Awesome Level 5/5

25/25
5/5
10/10

-Kelster Lynn

Score: 7

"Better than the First."

submission: Pass-my-Flash 2

date: January 25, 2009

This one was way better than the first one.
The other one was just a bunch of random things happening, where this one actually gave a storyline.
Great job everyone.

To Pako:
Nice job making the squirrel kill itself.
Dumb animal....

To NathanielMilburn:
That was uh, interesting when the squirrels skin fell off...

To DarkShadow8181:
I like how the skeleton became demonic.

To Luis:
Ha. The Plane was trying to catch the skeleton.

To Mrat:
Poor pilot... Having to land on a bunch of landscape then having something pop out of him.

To Coaly:
Strange how the worm turned into a caterpillar, then a butterfly(?)

The Swain:
That ending was hilarious.

Ugh. Reviewing for Collaboration Reviews is hard...
(I'm giving it a 7, based upon the overall average of everyone's work.)

-KelsterLynn

Score: 10

"Let's pull a B&W. And an Orange..."

submission: SHIFT 3

date: January 25, 2009

Whew! I finally managed to defeat it!
(kept putting it off and kept going back to the player packs.)
but, anyways, that was fun!
Loved the secret character ending.
And Mel Gibson was fun too!
(Although 007 would've been a better choice...)
Anyways, loved the game. Loved the story. Loved the ending. And loved the characters.
Oh! And the color! *cough*
A wonderful addition to the first two games.
Now all i've gotta do is get all those achievements...

5/5
10/10
-Kelster Lynn

Score: 7

"Good, but...."

submission: Naruto CC 4 - Beta

date: January 15, 2009

I really do like this version and the way that you did it looks great!
Especially the way that the clothes and other objects look as compared to the other 3 games.
But I miss the old version of the dress-up games that you had.
I know that this way it reduces clutter but it's hard for me to make a character this way. It's also quite tedious to go back and forth between all the choices.
Couldn't you just make something where it shows the items with buttons on the top to choose the category which you want to work with?
(i.e. if I wanted to change the hairstyle I would click on a button that said HAIRSTYLE and it would show me them. Then I could click-and-drag them to the body.)
Just a suggestion...

Anyways...

7/10
4/5

Score: 9

"One problem though..."

submission: Sphere Core

date: October 23, 2008

Great game.
A very challenging and satisfying point-and-click thinking game.
I loved playing every minute of it.
It left me stumped on so many parts till I looked around the whole room again.
There is a really big problem here, though....
I would love to finish this game, if I could.
When you put the Hot Power Core in place, and click the remote, nothing happens.
Well, actually no, that's not entirely true.
The words at the bottom of the screen say that there's no power core inserted.
This is mortifying.
All in all, Awesome game.
Please fix that glitch so I can see what happens next.

Graphics- "Great. It fits the mood entirely. Except for one small tile and core problem- (Core; I meant that when it's in the enertron, sometimes it disappears.)
Story- "Not that there really was a story involved. Of course this leaves your mind to wander where you are and what happened to you before you got here."
Sound "Just Awesome. Really fits the mood."

Scores:
Graphics- 4.5/5
Story- 4/5
Sound- 4.5/5
Overall- 13/15

5/5
9/10

-Kelster Lynn

Score: 7

"It's okay..."

submission: Mario's Adventure 2!

date: September 15, 2008

I like how this time, if you fell off a cliff you would just end up at the beginning of the level, whereas in the first one you start over completely.
But the game makes it hard to control Mario mainly because he seems to slide on everything. Thus, making the game control harder.
Also, when you jump at times he'll go only a few steps in front, but at other times he jumps 8 feet! (exaggerated of course, but he does jump a ways longer.)
Overall, I'd have to say that I actually like the first one better.

7/10 stars
3-4/5 points

-Kelster Lynn

Score: 7

"PUMPKIN"

submission: [WEBCAM] Candy Catch

date: September 5, 2008

This game, was okay.
It's challenging and moving the webcam everywhere is a good idea. Make's it challenging.
But, there was one main flaw in the game.
Even when I wasn't touching any of the icons, it still hit something.
Nothing in the backround was moving, and I was in the margins of the original model.
So, although this game wasn't the best one that you've done, it was a good time killer.

3/5
7/10

Kelster Lynn

Score: 9

"Legendary Ninja"

submission: !WEBCM-Night Of The Ninja

date: September 5, 2008

An addicting game (if you don't cheat) and one that gives you some entertainment.
Unlike my other review of Window Cleaner, I have a bit to say about this one.
A game where you're trying to kill ninjas by wacking, smashing, slapping, or pounding them with your hands.
Anything moving can hit them, I even tried the headbanging move to see how many ninjas I could get, before I got tired.
Enjoyable and fun.
My only complaint is that it's too dull.
I mean, I know that there's music on the main menu, but there could be some music for the fight scene.
(Then again, that all depends on if you can do that. I don't make these types of games so I wouldn't know.)
Anyways, good job.

9/10
5/5

-Kelster Lynn